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By day, I run a consulting company helping companies and people to work differently. By night I try to write, painfully and slowly, prose that is engaging and quick.

Currently 60000 words into Discovery, my first novel, and looking for feedback before plunging headlong into the finale - so please let me know what you think.

favourite books

Little, Big by John Crowley
The System of the World by Neal Stephenson
Handling Sin by Michael Malone
If, On A Winter's Night, A Traveller by Italo Calvino

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Discovery

Mike Bird

In this fast-moving future thriller, spy Jonathan Stepping faces a relentless battle to stay alive and stave off war.


The planet Orsino stands on the brink of war. Abandoned by aliens thousands of years ago and colonised by man in the 24th century, the planet is riven by national tensions centred on the Protectorate, a small state that has held the balance of power for one hundred and fifty years. But now someone is playing a different game.

Jonathan Stepping, a spy for the Protectorate, has to bring one of his colleagues in from the field. When it goes wrong he finds himself chasing down a plot to destroy the Protectorate and the only family he has left. He has only ten days to stop it- but how is he to do so, now that he is a wanted man and being chased by the most efficient killing team the planet has ever seen?

"...some of thebest writing I have found at Authonomy" - PeteM
"Masterly" - Jak
"I'd buy this" - Richard P-S
"...a damned good read" - Greta vdR
"The writing is superb" - dking97
"You've mastered the art of storytelling" - Hannah
"A cracking read" - Usenetfan

 

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I wrote 1257 days ago

Dave - Just read the seven chapters of Archer you have posted and enjoyed it very much. You have a strong authorial 'voice', a very good ear for dialogue and you move things along well. The premise is intriguing and I very much want to find out what is going to happen next. I have a few points... view book

I wrote 1257 days ago

Ruth - Just read the opening chapter of Family Snap. This is really very good indeed. You write with a surety of touch and voice that works really well, especially as you vary POV. Your plot premise is also very intriguing: I would like to know how it ends up. You write real dialogue, sharpl... view book

I wrote 1261 days ago

Jesse - Just read the first few chapters of Benny Santiago and enjoyed them very much. You are appealing very strongly to the 8-10 (mainly male) year-old market, it seems, and you have hit the tone of voice needed very accurately. It sounds like something from Dav Pikey (which is praise indeed)... view book

I wrote 1283 days ago

John - Welcome to Authonomy! Just read the first four chapters of Choke Point, attracted by the blurb. I think you have the makings here of a Clanceyesque spy thriller, with a lot of technical detail and a number of converging forces. I do, however, have a number of thoughts. First of all, I ... view book

I wrote 1284 days ago

Chris - Have just read the first seven chapters and very much enjoyed it. You create atmosphere very well and set up conundrums that are answered by complication, keeping the reader interested. You have now put Andrew in an impossible situation that I am now very keen to see how it is resolved.... view book

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