Interesting critique from someone who shows me no skill of their own to judge off of. All of my critiques on here are from people who I have never met or know, however, that being said, if you didn't care for it then that is your taste but that doesn't mean it's a bad book and obviously the com... view book

I've always enjoyed this time period so naturally, I enjoyed reading the first chapter. As many people have already pointed out, it has a Sherlock Holmes type of feel which is very fun. One thing you have is very well defined characters. I'm allergic to cats and reading about Johnny I almost snee... view book

So I read your book and let me start by saying that I enjoyed it. There seems to be a lot of Young Adult books on this site that are set within a school and I thought you did a good job at making your school unique on its own. The books feels like a 28 days later only this main character is awake ... view book

I've always been a fan of stories about Gypsies. I even have some in my book, but they aren't as vivid as yours. haha. I read the first two chapters and I wish I could say I found stuff that needed fixing or that the story was lacking, but I couldn't. You did everything very gracefully. I gues... view book

How can I hate a book whose first chapter starts with CHEESE!?!? I loved it, loved the voice of the narrator, loved the characters in the small town and the fine detail you gave about them. When I had read the prologue, or whatever you want to call it, I keep wondering "Who is this person who know... view book