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Words ought to be a little wild for they are the assaults of thought on the unthinking.

John Maynard Keynes
Thank you for some great editing advice, ComLIt Forum.
I have added some chapters to better explain the plot.

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Running After Tall Sexy Men

S. A. Devlin

A drunken, chaotic comedy that shows us sometimes the truth is measured by how much is left in the bottle.


At 30 years old, Lydia’s life is out of control in a city that feeds off chaos. As each chapter begins with a beauty pageant question, Lydia, a former child pageant star is in a quarter-life crisis and Doberman, a fifty-eight-year-old recovering alcoholic, is living with his mother in the Bronx and preparing to graduate from Bartending School.

When Lydia's pathological fear of makeup leads to her mistaken arrest at Macy's department store, her stint in Community Service finds her picking up trash outside Doberman’s Bronx row house.

This chance meeting between two different worlds takes Lydia on a new path with hilarious consequences. Her best friend is a liar, her boyfriend’s neurotic, and she just hired a bartender who won’t let anyone drink. While Lydia tries to get a new restaurant venture off the ground, a sudden death reveals $60,000 is missing-money that was supposed to pay for the restaurant.

Drawing on the only skills she has, Lydia puts together the beauty pageant of a lifetime, New York City Style, to raise the missing money.
Book is complete at 69,000 words. First 15 chapters available here.

 

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I wrote 58 days ago

ComLit Review Hi Kaal, I found you story very engaging, with a nice balance of personalities... Felicity is certainly setting up to be a handful! Some thoughts: Chapter 1 The first passengers filed off; an old man…(you have two sentences, and I'm no expert, but it feels like something that would... view book

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The Favor ComLit Review Hi Nick- you write like a screenplay writer, you have a talent for describing the scene, the characters, etc. Perhaps I am not familiar with the genre you are trying to emulate. Your book (up to Chapter 7 where I have left off) has qualities of 'Lush Life', but I am graspin... view book

I wrote 89 days ago

French Roast and Lingerie COMLIT review I think you need a gun on your cover, or someone will think ‘chick lit' when picking it up. You have some very funny moments in the first few chapters. I like the ‘physicality’ of your writing. -He twisted his lapels,-he stumbled out of the coffee sh... view book

I wrote 95 days ago

ComLIt Review- Hi Stephen, here's where I am so far- I feel like there is a lot of jumping around. Your paragraphs start with powerful, funny ideas (or visuals) and then 'bounce' to something else when you suddenly start another paragraph (they are all coming in a bit short). I would like to see m... view book

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ComLit Review If this doubles up, it's because something odd happened while I was typing the first time. (Damn Wacom Tablet-Zane you should appreciate that!) I have already messaged that I love the animation, and the narration was very much the voice in my head as I read the first chapters. A good... view book

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