I had a look at the first chapter, and I love all of the description! Hands like raw venison... ew! :) This deserves the editors desk! Here's my feedback: you switch back and forth from past tense to present tense. And in the very beginning, I wondered how he knew that the women who fell were ... view book

This isn't the kind of genre I'd usually read for fun, but I found that I quite enjoyed it! :) I like your writing style, and I found your story to be polished with a natural flow. I could visualize ithe characters and the action clearly. It starts with a great hook right from the start in the p... view book

I've just had the chance to read your prologue, and the first thing I noticed is that it's very polished - no typos, yay! The sudden mystery is gripping and makes me want to keep reading. I love the idea portrayed in the final sentence, but the wording is a little awkward. I stumbled over the "be... view book

Hey, just finished chapters 4-6, ewww, the finger!!! Awesome. I'm not sure why she doesn't immediately call the police though. Or why the son seems almost blase about the possibility of a dead girl in their yard (does he really want to go back to bed, or is he feeling deeply disturbed?) It makes... view book

Ooh, la-la. I love historical fiction and historical romance. I'm always impressed by the amount of research it takes. I love how you've woven a tale throughout the facts. I have only read the first chapter, so far, and I especially liked the last ominous line. In the beginning of the chapter, ... view book