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I am a reader rather than a writer, and wasn't planning on uploading a book...but then I never was very good at resisting temptation.

Please don't ask me to read your book, or even to do a swap-read. My WL is bulging and I really like to decide myself which books to read. Of course, that means you don't have to read mine either! :-)

If you send me the same spam you send umpteen other people, I will NOT read your book. I will not one-star it because I'm not that sort of person, but I will be annoyed. (It's not wise to annoy a snake.)

I don’t read a lot of literary fiction and am not overly fond of chick lit, neither do I care for gratuitous use of foul language or violence. I’m not looking for excessively religious books either. Romance is okay, unless it verges on the Mills&Boon style, which makes me both puke and laugh (hysterically). I like SF, thrillers, some fantasy and YA books. (But I have not been a young adult for a long time!) I won’t offer a comment unless I spot something that I either really like, or that really irritates me. I do not read misery-lit.

When I back a book I read as much of it as I can. I tend to shuffle my shelf every week or so.

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Terry Pratchett
Tanya Huff
Lois McMaster Bujold
Kerry Greenwood
Roger Zelazny
Isaac Asimov
Eric Frank Russell
Philippa Gregory
Ken Follett
Stephen Baxter
Harry Turtledove
Connie Willis
Jean Plaidy
Madelaine Brent
Nevil Shute
Desmond Bagley
Janet Evanovich
Sue Grafton
RE Delderfield
H Rider Haggard
Arthur Conan Doyle
Ray Bradbury
Sharyn McCrumb
Robert Westall

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We're Not Cute and Cuddly

Spilota

Meet Kack, Shriek, Brakkie, Hekkel, Slither and Splat – less attractive members of the animal kingdom. (Actually MUCH less attractive members!)


We tend to focus on the better looking and ‘nicer’ examples of the animal kingdom. These six are not good looking, and they are certainly not ‘nice’. However, some of them have been around far longer than humans and will probably outlast us.


Aimed at lower to middle primary children, these are informative pieces in the form of stories. The writing is a bit stilted and definitely of the ‘tell rather than show’ style. However, it is basically to inform. That’s my excuse and I’m sticking to it!
Kack is a cockroach,
Shriek is a shark,
Brakkie is a vampire bat,
Hekkkel is a hyena,
Slither is a carpet snake,
And Splat is a red back spider.
DEFINITELY not the cute and cuddly variety of creatures!


Because the total word count of the six is less than 10 000 words, I have added in a fictional piece about a mythical animal, also aimed at young readers.


Not aiming for the ED, but feedback is welcomed, including mention of typos and other nitpicky points. These pieces were written some years back and certainly could do with a thorough overhaul.

 

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Sharda D wrote 1 hour ago

Great. Glad I was a little bit useful. I've noticed people tend to su....

philip john wrote 3 hours ago

Thank you for your suggestion. Best wishes Philip John

AntoniaMarlowe wrote 5 hours ago

Oh she didnt disguise the vitriol very well. Almost identical to one....

AntoniaMarlowe wrote 6 hours ago

And I know less than nothing about AFL!!! I didnt even know they had....

AntoniaMarlowe wrote 11 hours ago

I only opened the letter an hour ago, still in shock. I'll be maki....

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I wrote 14 minutes ago

Delightful story about young Yuri. I have the feeling I looked at this before and am very happy to rate it well on the basis of this first story. Will be back for more. view book

I wrote 17 minutes ago

I've had this on my WL for a long tme and finally got to start reading it. I lost myself in it very quickly. The characterisation is very well done, and I warmed immediately to Hattie. view book

I wrote 3 hours ago

Have read the beginning of this one only and even without checking the details on the other version, I suspect the previous two comments might be spot on. Your characters are well painted; I can relate to them and think I wll find this an interesting read. view book

I wrote 1 day ago

CHIRG comment: Good pitch, but you don’t need to begin sentences with But and Then. They work just as well without, imo. (And as always this is only imo, of course.) A whimper of encouragement? Maybe a yelp, as whimper implies pain or negativity. Although I see you used a yelp of pain further on... view book

I wrote 3 days ago

This is a CHIRG review and as requested, I’m reading beyond the first 4 or so chapters. They seem to be nice short chapters, too. Excellent in a book for young readers. Parasthesia! LOL!! (and a porcupine mascot… this made me laugh.) This seems as if the author is speaking directly to the read... view book

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