Hey, I've just finished chapter 5, and i was pleased to see that the quality of the previous chapters has continued to shine as the story develops. There is some great dialogue, excellent and wise descriptions. I find it pleasant just reading words you've written, as your style is quite majestic.... view book

Hey, I really enjoyed this. Your writing is crisp and clear and is delivered with your magnetic style, which made me think my eyes must be made from metal, because i couldn't pry them away from the screen until the end of chapter three. At the end of the first chapter i was almost like the cliche... view book

Hey, This is a compelling story, brilliantly written with characters who feel real. I love the names -- Melhiera, Anuda -- excellent. The beginning of the first chapter has lovely descriptions followed by an exchange of intriguing dialouge between Melhiera and Iris which leads to their friendship... view book

Hey, This is an interesting read as you say "it's american history" and you're getting to tell it. It must have been tremendously rewarding to write this, and i do believe you have done well. I think this is one of those books which should be published also, as it's the kind of thing that would i... view book

The pitch is short but effective. I was instantly reminded of "Do androids dream of electric sheep" but also of the computer game "Fallout". These are two of my favourites, so i was excited from the off-set! Your writing has a particular style and it's particularly good! Any fan of sci-fi will love... view book