David, I loved the title of your book, it made me want to read it. Your pitch gave me second thoughts about wanting to read on. I did read on and I stumbled over the references to movies, tv.. Regis and Cathy... I want to read about the amazing man who has lived so full. I would start the fi... view book

Rachael, Wow, great story! I enjoyed reading the first few chapters, and I'll come back and read some more. I'll put you on my shelf soon! Susan The Adventures of Sohi view book

Pete, In general I think you are a good writer. I read chapter one, and found myself skimming over paragraphs trying to find some "meaty" story. I love the idea of your story, the pitch made me want to read the book and I actually poured my evening glass of wine and looked forward to thoroughly en... view book

I love to read science fiction and your story plot sounded very interesting. But, I struggled through the first chapter. It took me a while to figure out who was who and what was happening. It was sometimes hard to follow when the speaker was not identified, and it was hard to picture what was go... view book

Hi Harry, I got your message and you asked for an honest opinion. I loved the idea of your book, it sounded like a wonderful page turner, but you lost me in the first chapter with the letter to the parents. The sick son is so not into his disease and is downplaying it too much, I as a reader felt... view book