I love this! This is fantastic! You should be getting yourself published, if all the book is like this and it has a plot that matches the first four chapters. I would buy this book! Fitz Roney By the way, thanks, did I say thanks earlier for backing Tamar. I am laughing so hard after four ... view book

You are a master of powerful, descriptive adjectives and action verbs. I like it when I am drawn into a scene by the first sentence as I was with your story. "Blistered" I think was you first verb, as I recall, and it made me feel the hotness, uncomfortable, pulled right into the environment of th... view book

Good writing, interesting concept, like phrases such as the heroine and the villain, everything or nothing, if you go on assuming. Chapter two, which is really the disclaimers and rules is engaging and draws one to read on and the first chapter lives up to the promise of the rules chapter. I like ... view book

Dear CarolinaAl I knew it!!! You can write. I was teaching some high school kids English yesterday and one asked me what "personification" was. I wish I had had a copy of your manuscript to show them. In fact, if I had a copy of your chapter, I could use it was a model to teach writing. If t... view book

See you're high on religious charts as well you should be. Shirley Allen-Howard Roney view book