original concept. good mix of narrative and dialog, strong characters and tight pacing. view book

MDWS77: I read through seven chapters of you novel. You have an interesting concept but I think your story suffers from a lack of character development. Simply put, while you narrative is detailed and descriptive there is virtually no interaction between your characters. There was some, between Y... view book

Thank you Lacy. So far, everyone who has read this story likes it. The typos seem to be part of a conspiracy; I catch them, fix them but when I download I find new ones. Maybe there's something in the format, I don't know. But I'll get the ones you pointed out and thanks. As a Biblical scholar a... view book

Hi J.C. Of course, my crtique is just my own opinions. I rarely waste time pointing out punctuation, spelling and syntax errors. A Trained writer I think already knows where they are without having some nit-picker point a finger here and there. I think you've obviously that. Interesting pitch an... view book

Hi Lacy, When I read your pitch i thought this story would be pretty well-written and you didn't disappoint me. It's obvious that you're an accomplished writer who has spent a lot of time learning how to craft a story. As an avid listener of Focus on the Family I hear a lot of teaching on the p... view book