I am fascinated by your dialog. I was a bit distracted by the descriptions in some case were repetative with the word 'as', nowtheless very quick reading. I will back for more. glad to watch list it for now. Argonaut view book

I think your writing is powerful if not a bit over done, but still riveting. I did not get a feel for the girl's anguish, but maybe you did not intend it. Since I am a mother I should have been terrified and angry. I like it though. Be back for more. Keep writing. Argonaut view book

I will say this, it attracted my attention, because I loved the original Moby Dick. I think I would like to read your entire book. I can tell it is headed into adventure land. I am watchlisting this one and after I am done I will consider bookshelving. I love odd, wierd books that take me to ano... view book

I've read up to the tenth chapter. You've got me! I'm definitely bookshelving this book and recommending it to my friends. You're writing style is crisp and fresh. I was on the edge of my seat through every chapter, and I plan to come back for more! I hope this book gets the recognition it dese... view book