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Victoria Hunter

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Please don't be shy if I have forgotten to read your book and I said I would. Tell me (but don't be telling me fibs now....)

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Ramadan Sky

Victoria Hunter

To them I am Lady Chatterley gone mad. Do I have to explain my lover with the smooth skin and electric black eyebrows...?


He is snorkelling – waving his thin arms around in the inexpert way he did in Bali – but this time he is naked and asleep, eyes shut tight, crawling like a shrimp across the crisp linen. He chats away to her in a high-pitched voice, sometimes in English and sometimes in Indonesian. She wonders whether the conversations they have when he is awake make any more sense than those when he is asleep. And what the hell she is doing here with him in this inhospitable place. The morning call to prayer rings out as he suddenly opens his eyes to find her watching him. They begin their dance without speaking, desire rising and breaking like waves while the voice outside continues to proclaim the greatness of God.

 

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JRStacconi wrote 3 hours ago

That would be great, Victoria. I'm really looking for honest feedback....

JRStacconi wrote 5 hours ago

Hi Victoria, I just started reading your book and I really love it s....

Adeel wrote 2 days ago

Thanks victoria.

FRAN MACILVEY wrote 2 days ago

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JennyWren wrote 3 days ago

Thanks Victoria - I enjoyed your writing. Thanks for w/listing my boo....

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I wrote 4 days ago

What I've read so far: The character’s voice is very convincing and the description of them looking at the “camera obscura” quite comical and dramatic. It is very visual writing. Throughout this whole section (I’m calling it chapter 4) the writing is extremely well managed, imo. The character’s v... view book

I wrote 4 days ago

HI - there - I did warn you that I'm not a fan of sci fi. I AM a fan a good writing, meticulous editing, great level of detail and good characterisation. Good use of the song, which opens and ends the chapter and the drama. Wonderful setting up of suspense, and conflict. You have really nailed i... view book

I wrote 7 days ago

I have to comment one more time on this book, as I've read more of it now. I agree that it's one of the best books on this site. It's so original and polished. view book

I wrote 11 days ago

Hi there – this is a great start. It has a good flow and pace. I think it needs an edit, however. I have a few suggestions for Chapters 1 and 2. The tenses in the first paragraph are a bit mixed up between present and past. If you are talking about your dreams in general than you need to kee... view book

I wrote 13 days ago

"These days I am no longer bitter and twisted, just unsteady on my feet." What a fantastic line! I love this writing Fran. It is spare and evocative and very precise. I spent some years working with people with cerebral palsy and my youngest sister was born with cerebral palsy. She cannot speak or... view book

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