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C.Angelina

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first registered 03.07.10

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I've always been a writer, but I only recently realized it. I'm a sort of jack-of-all trades, creative style. I've done painting, drawing, sculpting, knitting, graphic design, carving, screenplays, novels, short stories, and graphic novels. My philosophy is that I'm willing to try anything once.

I'm a fairly new author, looking to be published, so any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. Rest assured I will return the favor.

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Boy, that's a hard one. Here's my short list: Chronicles of Narnia, Lord of the Rings, the Hitchhiker's trilogy, The Once and Future King, A Squire's Tale, Julie of the Wolves, Artemis Fowl, and the most recent book I've read.

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ndayery wrote 197 days ago

(rafica_4ndaye@yahoo.com) My name is rafica i saw your profile toda....

CMTStibbe wrote 217 days ago

Dear C. Angelina Having commented on my book some time ago, I am w....

ndaye wrote 228 days ago

(rafica_4ndaye@yahoo.com) My name is rafica i saw your profile toda....

Eponymous Rox wrote 253 days ago

Hullo there, C. My book's on the Ed's Desk this month and, because....

Dahliascrolls wrote 329 days ago

Hey C.Angelina! What happened to your book? I noticed it wasn't on ....

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I wrote 420 days ago

Gripping! Clare - Persistence of Vision view book

I wrote 420 days ago

I love this story. Definately something I would read. Backed. Clare - Persistence of Vision. view book

I wrote 420 days ago

Beautiful allegory. It has a very poetical feel to it, an almost dreamy quality. From your thread, I understand that the italics are supposed to be your words of wisdom. I think that for most western audiences, this would seem forced or contrived. You don't want to hit your reader over the head with... view book

I wrote 421 days ago

I really enjoy the plotting of this story. I like the relationship between the characters, especially Leo and Alek. You could use some more editing on the mechanics of this. For example, you say that someone said something, without actually letting them say it. It feels like you also use a bit too m... view book

I wrote 422 days ago

Great story and inventive plot! This may just be a personal preference, but it's off-putting to have the kids be always called children, especially if they are high-school aged. Also, when is this set? Having Aaron ask about film in this digital age is unsettling, because there aren't any clues earl... view book

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