Fi! I'm glad to see this is the one you posted and I can't wait to read the rest of it (I think the last time I saw it, there were only six chapters). Have fun here! view book

Hello, Sam! I finally managed to read through the first three chapters and wanted to leave my thoughts. Take or leave them at will. Ch. 1 “I used to bring a small knife to protect myself, but once I’d seen it was impossible to get attacked here, I now didn’t bother.” – This reads funny to me, ... view book

I thoroughly enjoyed this story, but in glancing through some of the earlier comments on the work, I feel I must agree with K A Smith's note about the relationship between Diogo and his father. I thought the whole tone of the story felt older than late nineteenth century, particularly with the stor... view book

Good evening (or good morning, in my case), Sir Dream Catcher! I've got an Alliance crit for you. As it's rather late and I'm tired, I only read the prologue and chapter one, but I can have a look at later chapters if you'd like once I've gotten forty winks or so. As always, please take with as m... view book

Hello, there, I've got an Alliance of Worldbuilders crit for you! As usual, take with as much salt as desired. I read the first four chapters and really enjoyed what I read. However, I feel that maybe you spend a little bit too much time and effort describing the setting - so much time is spent... view book