Hi, I've backed this - how could I not? It's well-written, intruiging and it draws the reader on so easily. And is the same kind of field as mine! If it were available in print I would read and enjoy it. I have a niggle, though, and you may well address it later in the book (I've only read ... view book

This is a BHCG review I comment as I go along, so please forgive the disjointed nature of my critique. Great start! We're right there in the action and I want to read on. "Horius spilt blood" where is this? On the floor? Perhaps make it clearer and I'd remove the comma after "just ... view book

This is a BHCG review Hi - time to view this again. I comment as a read so forgive me if its a bit disjointed. Opening para - gets you right there and gives a clear picture. Second para - this is less clear. I didn't understand what you meant in the sentence that begins "since the Romans.... view book

This is a BHCG review. I comment as I go along, so please bear with me if it seems a little disjointed! Short Pitch - good. Grabs me. Long Pitch - Doesn't do it for me. The first para is fine, if a little uninspiring, but the second and third seem to spoil the "hook" of the unexpected al... view book

This is a BHCG review Umm... I'm not sure if I've missed something here, but isn't this very similar to "A Conneticut Yankee in King Arthur's court" by Mark Twain? Sorry to be so blunt, but it seems somewhat plagiaristic. view book