Frank, the contractor is a very cetred and well written story. it is enjoyable and very easy to connect with the killer. I enjoyed reading, and I suppose that is all what you need to know from me. shah view book

This is my thing and you entertained me from the begining till the end, honestly. The story flows and the tension between you characters are there all the way, which excited me. And the action in the end of your chapter is fantastic, because it is fast paced and well played. Not boring at all. O... view book

It is very easy to read this story and it is perfect for children and young people. Easy, means a lot of thing: well written, easy to know the characters, easy to follow from one paragraph to another, easy dialogues, which is obviously very good. I dont say anything on the technical part, bacause ... view book

Ok, Simon, I read your first chapter till nearly the end, despite feeling terrible, as I mentioned to you. I read about you, your friends, pistols, fightings, shootings, blood, dead, and survivals. Where is the key in your writing? What do you want your reader to connect with? With you or with ... view book

Dear Dolores, I read your first chapter till nearly the end. I always look for what I dont like in someone's work than what I like. For the good bits I always back the book, but for what I dont like I leave a commnet. I 'm not a great writer or native English speaker. I critique a book from what... view book