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A good opening that establishes the sisters as easy characters to relate to. I think there's a whole lot of teenagers feeling out of place at school who are waiting for this book to come along. The deafness is a unique twist on the high school setting, and it adds an extra dimension to your work. Go... view book
I loved this - an intriguing peek into the back-stabbing world of high-pressure law. I can't offer any criticisms as it was all so well done! Great opening and your characters are deep and believable. Happy to back! Jonathan Watts Jenvilno view book
A great opening - good hook, and the reader is left wondering what the detective did to deserve this payback. I would advise you to go through and cut out 95% of the adjectives and adverbs. If the guy's smiling after killing someone's wife, we know he's pretty horrible. You don't have to describe th... view book
A good opening that ends on quite an intriguing cliffhanger. I found the layout a little distracting but that's probably more authonomy's fault than yours. Nothing to say about the writing except maybe watch for overuse of adjectives. I loved this, you have a way with atmosphere. Backed! Jonathan W... view book
Great pitch, and the opening is full of darkness and intrigue, more than enough to keep me interested. Your writing style is haunting. I can't suggest anything to improve. It all works for me. Backed. Jonathan Watts Jenvilno view book