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nac101

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I'm what you might call a fantasy fanatic. Anything creative, and out of the ordinary is usually what I'm looking for in a book. Doesn't have to be classifed as a fantasy for me to like it, but it needs some sort of twist or unexpected event to keep my attention.

I would appreciate any constructive criticism on grammar, sentence structure or any other flaws you see.

I've recently decided to take a break from Varzana and work on other stories, such as Evolution. I find it kind of hard to edit, when my mind was already halfway down the page and my eyes were still at the top. In other word I have the first few chapters of Varzana practically memorized.

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I wrote 701 days ago

Great work! I really liked your first chapter. It has a sense of mystery with the girl not having seen her Gran sense she was born and her mother so against her going. The scene at the pond really caught my intrested, it not everyday you look into a pool of water and see wings. Great work here. The... view book

I wrote 702 days ago

Gen sounds like a very complicated character, but in a good way that kept me interested. She sounds like she had a bit of a hard life, and likes to travel on her own seperate path. You've done a great job apealing to your target audience, I think a lot of teenager would find this story very enjoyabl... view book

I wrote 702 days ago

You have defiently appealed perfectly to your choose in adience. Teenager will reall be able to relate to this. Good Luck! Nac view book

I wrote 706 days ago

Your prologue and chapter one had a mysterious, and dark feel to them. You did a great job setting the scene and internal conflict. I could feel how scared and confused the girl was when she met the dark figure. I can’t help but feel sorry for the poor girl, for what I’ve read everything seams to be... view book

I wrote 758 days ago

Stunning over, great thing you have here. Backed NAC view book

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