Hello James, I read chapter one, and I love how you wrote this section.The first half reminds of a parable (which I love). It is simplistic, entertaining and to the point. Sometimes I think the simplest forms that are present in fairy tales are the best way to tell a message. I liked part tw... view book

Hello Bill, I'm going to do several reviews, but just one at a time since I have several books to catch up on. I read chapter one, and as a fan of HF I loved it :]. Even though at the moment I write a fantasy novel, I still haven't forgotten my HF roots. I found your action packed, symbolic and ... view book

Hello DW Davis, I've read the first three chapters so far, and I like what I see :}. My genre is typically alternative history and fantasy, but this book is enthralling. In my eyes, you depicted real life as inspirational and more important than we normally think. Too often when we look around us... view book

Hello Valerie, I've read the first chapter so far, and I like it. You put an interesting twist on the immortal aspect with the awakening, and the spell Hotan is under. With this in mind, I do have a few suggestions to chew over, if you wish :}. My first suggestion for this chapter would be sh... view book

Hello Laura, As promised, I'm returning your read :}. I've read chapter one so far, and I liked everything about it. It has an interesting linguistic and cultural appeal to it. The only suggestion I can think of is that a dictionary of the Spanish words might be an useful section. I"ll read more ... view book