Hello Sue, I read Hidden within with interest. As you have only uploaded 4 chaps I guess it is a work in progress. You adeptly create the tension very early on and I soon guessed something was amiss with Nathan. That small flag kept me reading on. Tension is again created in m/c feelings for ... view book

Evocative and suspenseful. The writing flows, enriched by a rare authenticity. I have WL this and high starred it. Will shelve shortly. Jenny LOVESICK view book

I read the first story and really enjoyed it. Touching and poignant. Your write fluently and with great sensitivity. High starred and on my WL. Will shelve shortly. Jenny Lovesick view book

Hello Pedro, Welcome to the site! I think the comments below by JMC are really good advice and worth noting. You have a very good concept with some nice touches. I love the idea of the writer having been driven to a mental institute by the pressure of his success. Most people on Authonomy woul... view book

Hi Pam, I backed your book for a while recently and wonder if you are ready to swop backings? Kind regards Jenny Lovesick view book