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I have been a journalist for more than 30 years. I currently write for the Amarillo Independent, a weekly newspaper seeking to revive the tradition of the competitive press. I have begun to focus my energies on creative writing, working now on a collection of short stories, and seeking to gain traction with several novels in various stages of presentation.

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Greg Rohloff

She's as beautiful on the outside as she is rotten on the inside. And there is no easy escape.


Donny runs drugs for a Dallas drug dealer. His drug-addicted wife taps into a package of cocaine during a delivery and overdoses. While she goes to a hospital, Donny dumps the package, setting up a battle in which he tries to shake loose from his wife, avoid the drug dealer who threatens to kill him and his family, and avoid being used as a tool by police, who are interested only in protecting him so long as he can help make the next bust, regardless of the life-endangering situations they leave him in. When Donny tries to break free, it will cost him more than he realizes because most of all, the life he wants to save, is his toddler son.

 

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I wrote 775 days ago

Frederic, I greatly enjoyed the satirical humor in the story, and I liked the asides that rips into societal norms. The use of fruit as a recurring image works well. Joe Ellis lives in a very dysfunctional world. You want to grab him and say, Joe just ask her to step out for a coffee some Saturday... view book

I wrote 776 days ago

You do a very good job of keeping the action front-and-center, and the topic, white supremacists, is, indeed, timely. Just noticed some small things, like some of the others, in spelling, grammatical constructions, and words that sound like the right word, but are the wrong word. In chapter 23, do a... view book

I wrote 794 days ago

Although I am not a fan of the romance-thriller genre, I am happy to comment on your book and back it. Your characters are believable, and the interactions between Lucas and Chelsea strike the right chord. Best of luck. Greg R. Users. view book

I wrote 794 days ago

I read the opening sections -- all very tight with a nice flow and a great sense of place to them. Then I skipped up to chapters 34-36. Again, very tight and a nice flow. In chapter 36, I noticed one detail that might not make much difference, given the stuff that some published authors get to leave... view book

I wrote 798 days ago

Dan, I've read the first six chapters. You set the premise out very well. The first chapter creates a sense of dread that bubbles under the surface. And you get the details right, the e-bay auction for the Fairlane part, the movie from the narrator's childhood. All this helps to make the premise of... view book

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