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I am a lawyer - retired, thank God. My debut novel "So Sour the Grape" (part reproduced here and available through Amazon and leading booksellers, rrp £7.99) tries to portray the hoplessness of the committed alcoholic - and the helplessness of the lover, spouse or friend who believes they can walk on water, can fix it - to find that they can't ... for, seemingly, nothing can.

Writing is addictive; and my second novel, which began life as "The Mine" then retitled "Bantu" - rather John Houston-ish, so reverted to "The Mine" - is somewhat different. Taking place in South Africa in 1985, when apartheid was at its height - as was the resistance to it - a black man and a white man are trapped in a mine, the sole survivors of a mining disaster. Yet it's nothing to do with mines - it's about segregation and an Africaan 'kaffir boetie's' (sympathiser) obligations to the child of the black man who, in the mine, saved his life and who, when he finds her, turns out to be someone more than just a child.

favourite books

Change of Address - Lee Langley.
The Shipping News - Annie Proulx
The Bridges of Madison County - R J Waller
Border Music - R J Waller
Any thing of Hemmingways
Anything of Steinbecks.
And 2 real oldies: These Lovers Fled Away - Howard Spring and 'Bonjour Tristesse' - Francoise Sagan

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my books

THE MINE

A. J. BAVIN

The only time Steiger ever held a black man by the arm was when he needed to inflict discipline on him.


South Africa, 1985. Apartheid is rife - and so is the resistance to it. Against this background a black man and a white man find themselves trapped underground, the sole survivors of a mining disaster. The black has been blinded by the explosion and the white man is badly injured. Segregation or not, only if they can work together can they get out - but do they?

Just say that one escapes. What are the reactions of that survivor to the young daughter of the other - particularly when Apartheid segregates black from white?

Although this story starts with a mining catastrophe, it is of a greater catastrophe that I write: Apartheid - which was a disaster for both blacks and whites alike. Fiction it may be - but it is fiction woven around the framework of cruelty and oppression inflicted by white on black in an attempt to keep a strangle hold on a 'beloved country' that wasn't theirs to hold in the first place.

 

SO SOUR THE GRAPE

A. J. BAVIN

Exploring the hopelessness of the committed alcoholic and the helplessness of those who care.


Rehab Clinic. Disillusioned lawyer meets Kensington socialite. Michael struggling, confused about almost everything and in denial about his alcoholism; Lottie a wealthy, hardened alcoholic. They prop each other up midst the emotions of self examination, confessional and penitence - the hallmarks of the Minnesota Model for the reformation of the alcoholic. Discharged, a relationship is bound to form - albeit that relationships in early recovery are deemed to be dangerous. When Lottie relapses, Michael has to ask himself whether he loved her or was just attracted to her body and to her wealth – and to examine the part that he has played in her downfall.

Sorry, but this story has a sad ending.

 

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Isoje David wrote 12 days ago

Hi My name is David. I am a young writer who is trying to become a....

Karamak wrote 12 days ago

I hope you enjoy reading my book and it doesn't stop you dreaming! x

Sharda D wrote 13 days ago

Great. I'll WL The Mine. Spent quite a lot of my student life at the ....

Sharda D wrote 13 days ago

Hi donkeyjacket! Thank you so much for backing Mr Unusually's Circus....

patio wrote 27 days ago

Thank you Loopy....that's a first

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I wrote 10 days ago

God bless you, Lady! I wish I was enjoying writing it just now - but we all have bad days. Helped by your kind comments, I shall pick myself up, dust myself down, tear up my last chapter - and start over! thanks, AJB view book

I wrote 16 days ago

Thanks, chum: Some people are lucky (or maybe they're unlucky?) and don't have to question that sort of stuff.. But me, told in a rehab clinic that I didn't love my wife, that was something I really had to sit down and work out for myself. What IS love? I don't know if the answer is right - but it s... view book

I wrote 27 days ago

Anyone who 'enjoyed' this must be loopy - yet anyone who failed to take something away from it must be more loopy still. Well done - it was a real eye-opener. AJB ('The Mine' and 'So Sour the Grape'.) view book

I wrote 28 days ago

Thanks, tons. You know, if it's not going to provoke debate, evoke memories or raise a few eyebrows, I can't see it's worth writing. What astounds me is that it is doing so much better than my first, 'So Sour the Grape'. Maybe your first book is like your first love – you never forget it; but, to me... view book

I wrote 29 days ago

Jane, I enjoyed it – at least the first three chapters that I have read. I have only one comment – your writing is terse and very succinct but for me everything moved just a little bit too fast. I know that this is the big bad west (which I, a Limy, can only imagine); and I know that life was tough ... view book

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