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Venusu

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Authonomy has been amazing. I've loved having my two books up on the site close to a year, but I've lost hope that, with two jobs, I'd ever have time to make it to the ED and if HC was interested they've had their shot at my books! So I'm going to keep my identity here and read and support great writing, but taking my books down to make more time to actually WRITE.

Best to all and thanks Authonomy, for all the wonderful friends you've brought into my life!

favourite books

A Natural History of the Senses- Diane Ackerman
Kay Scarpetta series of gore/crime thrillers by Patricia Cornwell
The Mermaid Chair- Sue Monk Kidd
American Gods- Neil Gaiman
LOTR books- JRR Tolkien
Voyager series by Diana Gabaldon
anything by Ray Bradbury (he's my hero)

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I wrote 418 days ago

Hello. My friend recommended this to me, I write psych crime fiction as well. Opening para: needs more of a hook, much more. A rambling description of a creek, however beautifully spun, isn't going to capture readers of this genre. Show us the skull right off in the stream or some such. The story... view book

I wrote 419 days ago

Hi Sue, You need to strengthen the hook in your first paragraph- let us feel a sense of apprehension, danger. Why is she speeding? Instead it feels just annoying, which is no way to open a book. That first sentence needs to be AWESOME. "Just when Susan thought she was going to get away with the t... view book

I wrote 725 days ago

Disturbing. Possible. Haunting. V view book

I wrote 729 days ago

Enjoyably offbeat. V Hawaiian Orchid view book

I wrote 729 days ago

Like a fine drawn etching. V Hawaiian Orchid view book

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