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Geoff Thorne

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Better Angels

Geoffrey Thorne

A fugitive comes home to settle old scores and gets caught in the schemes of some grifters out to rip off the local mob boss.


"MEN PLAN, GOD LAUGHS."

Those words should have been tattooed on Nicky's forehead at birth. If they had maybe he wouldn't be in this fix. It was supposed to be so simple: just scam the local Russian mobster out of some money and drugs, then skip out of town before he knows he's been fleeced.

It looked good on paper. It sounded good when he talked it out but, as usual with Nicky, the minute he brought his dream grift into the real world things went straight to hell. His partner seems to have pulled a double cross, his girlfriend is totally useless, the Russians are coming for their property and all Nicky's got to get himself out of this are his wits and his mouth. And that's before Max showed up with his hard guy attitude and quick fists. Yeah, things are going to Hell, all right.

Seems like Nicky forgot the first rule of survival on the mean streets of GRAY HARBOR:

Always make sure the guy holding the gun is you.

*This MS is complete but not complete on the site.

 

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I wrote 81 days ago

no, they are there to denote longer time breaks or shifts of POV. I stopped using them later in the book so the MS that goes out to editors doesn't have them. But thanks for the kind words. I never set out to write a book one can just toss away even if it seems like it's just one more in the ge... view book

I wrote 95 days ago

Yeah, you're backed. this is fun. terry pratchett fun. my rule is simple: would I buy this in a book store based on what i might read while standing there? the answer is, "yes." you held me for three chapters; you made me smile by the middle of the first, so you're backed. nice work. view book

I wrote 119 days ago

lol. i love this. no complaints. no notes. seriously. just good solid writing and a wicked strong Voice. You grabbed me on sentence one and held me until section 5 and I only broke off to return to work. my rule is simple: "Would I buy this in a shop based upon what I've read in this sitting?... view book

I wrote 156 days ago

thanks for the actual critique. Rarely do people actually delve. I will modify the liquor thing (i don't drink so it was an easy error. fixable.) as for the stuff about the water, I've lived in coastal cities all my life and you can definitely smell the water in the air when you're close to a lar... view book

I wrote 244 days ago

You know what you're doing. This is fine work. usually I'll mention the pacing or the imagery or how the writer was able to strike just the right (or nearly right) balance between the Real and the Fantastic. I'm not going to say any of that in this case because it's redundant. This is a book. This... view book

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