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Geoff Thorne

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I gave up real participation here several months ago, sorry. If you're interested in my prose work, please click the Wintermanproject link. If you're interested in my upcoming comic book, PRODIGAL: EGG OF FIRST LIGHT, click the other link.

If you want AUTHONOMY to be worthwhile I urge you to play it straight. Read books, back the ones you like, give honest critiques you think will actually help your fellow writers. Don't treat it like a game or a lottery because it's not. Get-rich-quick or get-famous-quick schemes are for suckers. Hard work and perseverance might be boring to talk about but they actually do win the day.

Okay? Lecture over. Go have fun.

I don't respond to spam (nothing personal.) And I usually (as in ALMOST NEVER) don't swap.


favourite books

A Wizard of Earthsea - Le Guin
Parable of the Sower - Butler
Double Indemnity - Cain
Otherland - Williams
Right Ho, Jeeves - Wodehouse
Storm Front - Butcher
Dune - Herbert
The Magician's Nephew - Lewis
Curse of the Blue Tattoo - Meyer
The Maltese Falcon - Hammett
Rita Hayworth & the Shawshank Redemption - King
Sandman - Gaiman
The Three Musketeers - Dumas
Nine Princes in Amber - Zelazny
Blood Music - Bear
Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy - Adams
Jhereg - Brust
The Illustrated Man - Bradbury
Invisible Man - Ellison
The House @ Pooh Corner - Milne
The Black Cauldron - Alexander
Kidnapped - Stevenson
The Getaway - Thompson

my websites

http://redjacket.blogspot.com     http://wintermanproject.blogspot.com

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my books

Better Angels, A Gray Harbor ....

Geoffrey Thorne

A soldier returns home to settle old scores and gets caught up in the schemes of some grifters out to rip off the Russian mob.


On the surface BETTER ANGELS is the story of four characters thrust together during the chilly dregs of a very wet autumn and one of those characters is a place.

NIKKI IS...
...looking for his big score and maybe to save his own life.

LAYLA IS...
...looking for a way out of the shit storm once and for all.

MAX IS...
...looking for absolution and maybe a little slice of redemption in the warrens of concrete and steel he used to call home.

GRAY HARBOR IS...
...a cold place, skeletal, dying slowly on the edge of the water. The locals are hard, frosty, grinding through a life that is often brutal and shorter than expected. You can taste desperation in the air, wafting through the empty spaces like clouds of bitter cologne. There's only one rule in the Harbor that most everybody knows:

"Get out, quick, and don't look back."

Under the surface?

Well. You'll have to come visit to find out.

(This MS is complete but not fully uploaded to AUTHONOMY. Any editor or agent who wants to see the full MS can email me.)

 

Galatea's Cross

Geoffrey Thorne

Maybe she murdered them. Maybe not. Maybe she should go to prison. Maybe not. Maybe they want to kill her. Maybe not. Maybe she's human...


In the future the world is dominated by gigantic mega corporations that rule the markets like high tech feudal kingdoms. The only protection humanity has against the whims and machinations of the Megas is the Human/Corporate Advocacy, the HCA.

Of the HCA's many agents, Tim Cross is one of the best. Smart, shrewd, incisive, he's a man cut from a cloth woven in a bygone era- an old-school private dick forced to live in a pristine, almost antiseptic future.

When the teenaged murder suspect Cross has been assigned to protect turns out to be more than anybody expected, what follows is a high-speed, high casualty race to solve the mystery of the girl before the powerful forces out to kill her get their wish.

 

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Dadoo wrote 1 hour ago

Hi Geoff; Please don't read my book yet, if you were actually incl....

Kelvin O'Ralph wrote 2 hours ago

Sorry, A Gray Habor.....

Kelvin O'Ralph wrote 2 hours ago

Sorry, A Gray Habor.....

Kelvin O'Ralph wrote 2 hours ago

Hiya, I enjoyed reading the hook of "Better angels, a great hab....

Cariad wrote 12 hours ago

And mine too - wow. And as do I. No one else seems to have heard of....

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I wrote 5 days ago

Wow. I'm hooked. This is awesome from the first paragraph. I'm guessing this is a YA adventure and it hits all my buttons in just the right way. I have no complaints. No advice. No nothing except applause. Which is rare for me. If you look at my other crits, you'll see I'm rarely this gushy. T... view book

I wrote 5 days ago

Wow. I'm hooked. This is awesome from the first paragraph. I'm guessing this is a YA adventure and it hits all my buttons in just the right way. I have no complaints. No advice. No nothing except applause. Which is rare for me. If you look at my other crits, you'll see I'm rarely this gushy. T... view book

I wrote 9 days ago

my opinion. It needs a line edit to prune out some over-written bits but it's better to have slightly too much than any too little. It's a solid draft. I'm a sucker for tis kind of stuff and, while I thought the opening few paragraphs were a bit wobbly, you settled into the voice quick enough ... view book

I wrote 11 days ago

I could have sworn I'd back this book months ago. There's nothing wrong here as far as I can see. I'd actually point it out to others and one of the best examples of how to start a thriller that exists on this site. There are no action-stopping info dumps. The characters feel like real people fro... view book

I wrote 12 days ago

All right. A couple of things. The three hardest things to write effectively are Love (usually comes out either salacious or maudlin), Comedy (because guaranteeing a laugh or even a smile from someone reading your work is like climbing mount Everest naked in beach sandals) and, of course, childre... view book

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