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‘Savaged innocence’ was written in anger. Having heard of yet another cover-up of the large-scale sexual abuse of children I sat down and wrote several thousand words in a white hot fury. I then put the book away for two years. Finding it the other day, I re-read what I’d written –and felt sickened. Knowing that similar or worse is happening daily convinced me to upload part of it.

I imagine you’ll feel uncomfortable reading it. Don’t worry - you can bet that your discomfort is not one hundredth of the discomfort felt by those betrayed innocents, not one hundredth.


Please note: I will return any visit made to the book, or indeed, my original placing ‘Houses of Sand’. If I like your book I will back it –but make no further comment. If I don’t, I’ll simply message ‘I’m sorry, but not for me’. Having been on Authonomy previously, I’m only too conscious of it being a quicksand for all of us trying to write as we spend all our creative time reading and commenting on the work of others –enjoyable and rewarding though it frequently is - rather than actually doing what we should be about, which is writing ourselves!


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The savaged innocence of a bro....

Anthony Litton

A stark, cold and comfortless story about the abuse, betrayal, pain and destruction of children used as sexual objects.



Interspersed with graphic internal imagery from one of those affected, the story portrays the struggle of eight people to recover from the appalling physical and emotional damage left after their involvement in a mega- motorway crash and pile-up..
The resulting trauma produces fault lines in what had been an unbreakable cement wall and the recovery of at least one person is threatened by increasingly vivid imagery of appalling child sexual abuse. Are they flashbacks of actual events - and if so as victim or perpetrator? Or, maybe, they’re fantasies, unfulfilled, denied, even, but long wanted.

Whatever their source, the resulting confusion fear and distress threaten the success of an already difficult struggle back to health.

Which of those involved in the crash is haunted by the imagery is unclear for most of the story. Is it the nineteen year old Patsy, already suffering huge grief at a devastating loss; the icy Veronica, so self-contained and unreachable; or Alan, the young uncle now de facto father to two young orphans? Or maybe it’s Geraldine, affluent, self-confident and successful; or perhaps it’s Giles, one of the emergency services heroes of the day………… or maybe none of these.

 

Houses of Sand

Anthony Litton

Early 20th century Arabia's at war. Narash, a small sheikdom, fights to survive against a background of family betrayal, inter-tribal warfare and waning Ottoman influence.


It’s the early 20th century and war rages across Arabia. Faoud, ruler of Narash, a small coastal Sheikhdom, battles to maintain its independence.

Weak, exiled and desperately trying to maintain his shifting bedouin alliances, he has, simultaneously to keep enemy tribes at bay while dealing with deadly internal conflicts raging within his own family; not least with his own wife.

Faoud and his powerful mother, the Sheikha Faroum, realise that Narash’s greatest strength – their excellent harbour and trade routes, are also their greatest weakness, as many powerful enemies covet them.

They know they can’t survive alone, and must make alliances. But with whom? Certainly with other tribal leaders; but after that? Does he strengthen alliances with the Ottomans or seek support from the growing British presence?

Also central is Faoud’s relationship with a slave girl, who, after being captured by him in a murderous raid,has taken an oath to kill him. Meanwhile, she becomes a major player-behind the scenes, becoming increasingly wealthy as she trades in ivory, spices, slaves and guns.

Authors note: Though fiction, every attempt has been made for both historical and cultural accuracy. Should any errors have crept in despite this, I will happily correct them

 

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I wrote 865 days ago

Hi A strong writing style and a story that pulls one in. Definitely Shelved for a period Anthony ('Houses of Sand') view book

I wrote 867 days ago

Hi Harvey A strong beginning to what promises to be a great story set in a comparitively unknown period. More than happy to Shelve this for a period! anthony ('Houses of Sand'|) view book

I wrote 878 days ago

Hi I think I've read and backed this previously -it well deserves it. As I 'm not sure,however, Ii'm doing it again to be certain! Good luck with it! Anthony view book

I wrote 881 days ago

Hi L Roger I found the plotline intriguing, when I read the pitch. I think, however, that the writing style doesn't do the story justice. I don't do 'Editor style analyses, just try and judge by the three criteria I list in my profile and, to be honest, at this stage in it's development, I don't... view book

I wrote 885 days ago

Hi Raymond. i found the story very moving yet with an added element of tension. Along with the quality of the writing it makes your book a shoo in for Shelving! Anthony 'Houses of Sand' view book

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