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Songwriter, creative writing teacher, reformed culinary disaster.

I've been a writer and a teacher for a dozen or so years, primarily helping at-risk students hone their writing skills. I am battling an auto-immune disease brought on by complications from Lyme Disease, a hazard (like twisters) given the climate of my hometown. I primarily use the site to find shining manuscripts in the slush, much like finding unique shells on the beach, but I mainly stick around to improve my own writing, a struggle that never ends (I don't think it's supposed to).

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Anything by B. Cameron Lee
Anything by Richard Thurston
Seep Eric Laing
Notes on An Orange Burial Greg Levin
The Girl from Ithaca Cherry Gregory
The Man Who Needed Killing Susan Brassfield Cogan
Legacy J.L. Fontaine
The Beginning David Conners
Bad Bishop I. Soldato
Luminous Dark Ross Clark
Under the Same Sky Genevieve Graham
The Virus E.M. Delaney
The Hanging of Margaret Dickson Alison Butler
The Doctor of Summitville Bill Carrigan
Writers on the Storm Laura Freeman
The Ark of Humanity Scott Toney
The Fall of Jasper McCaine Kevin McGreer
The Insiders -- Poulsen
Head Games Kevin Alex Baker
The Curtain Twitcher's Handbook Jo Danilo
A Second Life Glenn Haybittle
Stone Fish Sly
Viene La Tormente (Comes the Storm) S.C. Thompson
Waystation to Prosperity Street KC Fenton
The Brotherhood Brian Caves
The Scattered Proud Gev Sweeney
Slow Train Comin' Jedah Mayberry
The Writer's Children Rebecca Ash
Jabin Bev Allen
The Forever Girl Rebecca Hamilton
Seep Eric Laing
Will of God Kevin Clark
The Seamless Garment Adrian Belisario
Fidelity Benjamin Dancer
Entente Cordiale Lucy Uttley
The Pigtailed Heart Ruth Francisco
The Qualities of Wood Mary White
Thinking Like a Wildebeast Stephen Racket
Still Life Steffan Gilbert
Layers of the Heart C. Valentine Scott
The Shouting Tree Callaghan Grant

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Ashes By Now

L. Andrea Mosier

When Sloan McCandless tangles with an EF-5, the result is a supermodel face and brain damage. Can she trade a songwriting career for crime solving?


When Sloan McCandless flips her Mustang in a deadly storm, she awakens with a supermodel face and brain damage. Leaving her songwriting career behind, she sets out to find answers to questions no one wants to talk about. For one, why did the surgeon all but erase her African features and turn her into a Barbie doll? When Sheriff Hank Overton, her old lover, drafts her to work a murder case, Sloan dares to hope Hank can help her solve the puzzle.

But the murder case plunges Sloan deep into a strangely dark, backwoods community full of fear and prejudice, drawing her into the lives of everyone involved, including the murder victim's husband, who happens to be Hank's best friend. Even as Hank begins to suspect his old buddy has committed homicide, Sloan puts her life on the line to discover the truth, not only about the suspect, Lyle Lofton, but about the stranger in the mirror. She falls headlong into the life of a crime investigator; however, she can’t outrun the long shadow of her own history steeped in the dirty secrets of two small towns halfway across the globe from each other.

 

Drowning Lessons

L. Andrea Mosier

After Charlotte Strawman kidnaps a sex offender, someone picks up where she left off. Can she trust her ailing mind?


Charlotte Strawman's biggest problem is not that she kidnapped an unregistered sex offender living in her neighborhood. She's not even that worried about whether Metro's Assistant District Attorney will get her for kidnapping Tim Ferris, the guy who (aw, shucks!) forgot to register with the State of Tennessee after his latest sex-based crime. Charlotte's third-biggest problem is the thing she can't remember. Her second-biggest problem is how to stop her mother from taking over her life, seeing as how her mother's been dead for a good, long time. Her Number One problem will be proving her innocence, given that she's not going to be much help.

"Charlie" finds herself smacking into real life and not liking it one bit. Kidnapping Ferris is just one way she screams out to the universe that she just isn't going to take it anymore. By the time her shrink learns of Charlie's "other" personality (her mother, the unsinkable Adeline Strawman) the Davidson County Grand Jury is meeting in Nashville to indict Charlotte on three counts of kidnapping. Nobody likes sex offenders (go figure), and people are lining up to confess. Will the jury like her for the crime?

 

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patio wrote 14 hours ago

I write with greetings and invitation to read a chapter or more of my....

The Knowledge wrote 5 days ago

Hi memphisgirl, My book is simply called ‘Madeline’ (Link below) Sh....

Casimir Greenfield wrote 6 days ago

Hi there - just extending the hand of friendship. I'm still fairl....

Casimir Greenfield wrote 6 days ago

Hi there - just extending the hand of friendship. Welcome to the wond....

tomkepler wrote 7 days ago

Read the first two chapters of Ashes by now. I love the free-flow of ....

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I wrote 80 days ago

I would suggest putting Chapter Two in Chapter One's position. I think you needed Ch 1 to get yourself going, but you got going in Two, so you could delete One. See what you think. I would change the Inspector's name unless you mean it to be ironic. Jack Daniels is an iconic whiskey made near my hom... view book

I wrote 82 days ago

I can't stop reading this. The bonus is, this is some of the best no-nonsense, economic writing on the site. Hard hitting. The way the writer tells the story pulled me in completely. Memphis Girl (Lisa) view book

I wrote 82 days ago

I read in your profile that your book is with an editor. I will read the first few chapters again when the carving and polishing is finished. My best advice is for you to read On Writing by Stephen King. Dialogue requires an ear almost as sharp as a musician's ear for pitch, and adverbial speech tag... view book

I wrote 82 days ago

You have taken on many responsibilities simultaneously that can either work for the book or against it. You have put us in Tristan's head alone, a move with which I happen to agree, and you love to write about the possibilities of Time Travel. The biggest problem I see is your tendency to explain ab... view book

I wrote 93 days ago

You have a nice, clean style that is most of the time easy to read. I would suggest narrowing the POV to Moni, Mariella, and the detective (Aaron). The teacher's view (Mrs. Mint) on things could be shared with Moni in the classroom via dialogue without putting us inside Mint's head for five minutes.... view book

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