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Benjamin Dancer

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I’m unbelievably fortunate to be an English teacher at Jefferson County Open School in Lakewood, Colorado, one of the last high schools in the country where students still love school.

I'm also the author of The Father Trilogy, of which Fidelity is the second book. You can check out the rest of the trilogy at BenjaminDancer.com.

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Fidelity

Benjamin Dancer

As the blizzard worsens, Cal climbs higher on the mountain, unaware that his pursuit of the elk is a pursuit of Junior, his dead son.


Cal's burn scars are his only memorial of his son.  It's been two years since the deadly conflagration. Conditions on the mountain deteriorate.  We enter his inner world.  Sarah, his wife, is leaving him.  A growing chasm separates the lovers: Cal's abandonment of their faith, Sarah's accumulating disappointment–now this: Cal is talking with the ghost.

 

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Bill Carrigan wrote 61 days ago

Congratulations, Ben, on getting "Fidelity" to the Desk! I wish it ev....

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Benjamin Dancer, Sorry I was away for such a long time. Not that ....

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I wrote 438 days ago

I'm in ch 1. Here are my notes: "...to safety" adds tension to the 1st paragraph import-export ups the tension the marshal ups it again good character building through the conversation in the SUV The details of the WPP are a great touch, high interest You leave the ch with tons o... view book

I wrote 438 days ago

I'm in ch 1. Here are my notes: You establish good tension by showing the stress between her and Ryan. You show us her depression: hard to get out of bed, job, etc. And have us sympathizing with the betrayal. The reoccurring dream--nice touch A lot of good element to play with her. You'... view book

I wrote 439 days ago

I'm in ch 1. Here are my notes: Interesting 1st line. Picturesque 2nd paragraph Good tension with the surveillance The tension sky-rockets with the attack Then climbs again when Toni decides to go after the killer Very strong hook of a chapter However, it's a huge mistake sw... view book

I wrote 439 days ago

I'm in ch 12. Here are my notes: Being in the POV of darkness is new way to approach a story The dark flames and constant destruction are powerful images in this fight scene To have an identity crisis in the middle of the battle was an interesting twist This must be the climax of your s... view book

I wrote 439 days ago

I'm in ch 4. Here are my notes: doesn't drove=drive first laying=lay great image of grandpa certain make=to make probable=probably right By the time we leave the dinner, the reader really like grandpa, the town, the people it--and doesn't care much for Sean. There's tension wi... view book

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