There are two books I have read in the time I have been on this site that I could, without a doubt, see being published. This is one of them. My question is, why are you not in the top 100 at least? Harper Collins should be paying attention to this book. Query it, get it out there to agent... view book

Not a lot to say. Fantastic. view book

I don’t read much in the way of true stories, but I’ll give this a go. Why did he ‘conspicuously’ close his bible? Summers? No. Summer. In the summer. I see you mean more than one summer, but it jars this way. Why are you wearing tights in the summer? You have a LOT of semi-colons. ... view book

Good pitch, good start. As I was reading the word ‘right’ jarred with me in the sentence, ‘A twisted piece of metal had sliced right though the front tyre.’ I thought, not needed, but you could get away with it UNTIL you did it again in the second paragraph. ‘The memory blew right through him lik... view book

I was going to back you, but you still didn't get rid of your marketin plan. view book