Having just read the first two chapters, I can already tell you seem to be having some type of love affair with adjectives : D :D (I view that as positive! :) A particular phrase that made me guffaw was "the sweet sweat," Launa was inhaling or something. Is sweat sweet? I would normally describe ... view book

You have a winner on your hands :) I did have to skim-read bits though. I think it was purely just because I wanted to get to the bits where Devon and Eleanor interact. A particular favorite is the scene where Eleanor is digging out the bullet from Devon's back :) view book

Er, hey. Just came to show my support :) This is where all the cool kids seem to be hangin these dayz view book

You're lucky I love this story so much. And you're also lucky that I'd already created this account a while back :) Yep, it's me the ever anonymous "Sabreal". Your PM was hilarious. I'm pretty sure that one xtra person backing u (that being moi) would hardly make the difference of launching u to... view book