I wrote out a whole paragraph about this book but somehow it disappeared before I could click submit. So here goes again: I enjoyed your story, good tension building. Had me wondering what could possibly be going on, made me want to keep reading. What I had trouble with is that some of the areas ... view book

This is a little too sci fi for me but i did read the first chapter. Your world building is pretty good. The characters are believable, as is the scenario. You jumped around in point of view in a way that jarred me - I had to go back and reread when you switched points of view. Also, there may be ju... view book

I love the character and an enjoyable read. A little heavy on the narrative, would have liked more dialogue at the beginning, but once you got the dialogue in there it was fantastic. Marla Bowie LePley AFTER view book

Saw your pitch and checked out the book. It's really good. It drew me in instantly. The tension building works well, not too fast, not too slow. Strong characters and the horror aspect comes through from page one. The only thing that struck me was the use of short sentences. It felt a little clipped... view book

Read three chapters and really liked this. You clearly have a gift for writing. Your dialogue was natural, I felt like I was in the conversations. I love the premise. The descriptions of surrounding brought me into the story well. I would only say that at some points it was more wordy than needed, a... view book