Compelling writing. Beautifully told. view book

I loved the front cover. It really suits the book well. When chapter one opened I was pleasantly surprised to find that you have two contented lovers enjoying their friendship and intimacy. Bonus points for this. In the next section, I was disappointed when I saw that you flipped POV fro... view book

Cold Grey - the title doesn't evoke anything for me, but you have a nice short description of the book. You've chosen a difficult POV - 1st person. But you've got the storytellers past tense working well. Chapter 1 - sp. mistake. Here she lie - should this be 'lies'? I'm not sure whether this i... view book

Loved chapter 7. Just noticed one spelling mistake - lead - I think this should be led. Tata. view book

Chapter 1 On my first read, I found myself being repelled in the idea that anyone would want to dance upon someone elses grave, which in turn led me to be repelled from Josie. However, halfway through, there is the hook about the woman in red and the gypsies prophecy which carries weight in the li... view book