To be young and adventerous again. I have to say I admire Sophie's character and her willingness to take chances. Sophie and her quirkyness appear to be well developed. (Asking a stanger for money and liking heels but wanting to live in the country.)This looks like an enjoyable read. Now for some ni... view book

It took me two days to read all thirty two chapters. I've been checking regularly to see if you have downloaded more. This is a very good story, what are you waiting for? LOL. Lisa view book

Hello Sarah, You have a very strong premise for a book. I like it. In my opinion you are a very detail oriented writer. My writing style is similar and different from yours. Similar in the direct approach. Different because your sentences are very long. I'm not saying it's wrong but in my opinion ... view book

You have a good storyline. I think this would make a great YA novel. In the second to the last paragraph In the sentence brushed one hand over the over is what you wrote i think you meant to write one hand over the other. Your setting in the school and the dialogue are very realistic for a high sch... view book

Hello Starla, I have read the first three chapters of your book and could totally relate to the characters. I felt the guy at the gym was creepy and in my humble opinion you did a good job of setting up creepy circumstances. That situation made me want to read on to find out what would happen next.... view book