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(rafica_4ndaye@yahoo.com) My name is rafica i saw your profile toda....
First came Apocalypse Then Now comes the sequel Apocalypse Then....
Thanks imersion, much appreciated. Best wishes, Barry
Hello imersion, Would you care to read 'The Sun and the Saber'? My....
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Thank you for exposing yourself and your dear sweet child to our scrutiny. Thnak you for going through this misery for us. Perhaps we too grew a little with you. You have made the experience rranslucent, like poetry, shimmering before us with a ghostly reality. The dog's poop has been trasnmuted... view book
after reading the book, one of the tics I would suggest you use andd elaborate in the book, is the strange eyes that Lena has. I don't know where you are going with this, bu tI think it would be fun to have her look in the mirror and admire her own eyes at some point earlieer on; or have the spilt ... view book
chaptyer 10 shortly lved should be short lived view book
chapter 10 what it is? shoudl be what is it? view book
Chap. 5 and 6 really moved the mood and the story along nicely. The creepy gnomes seem threatening and harmless - a nice touch for a young adult book. The family tree promises an interesting surprise too. view book
