I was looking for something to read over my lunch break and came across this. I read the first two chapters and found it highly entertaining. It has great characters, a wonderfully descriptive writing style and loads of potential. My only suggestion would be to shorten or split the long first ch... view book

YARG Review Hi Mary, I've had you on my watchlist for a bit. Here's my YARG for Exterium. Cheers, Fyn Chapter 1 This is a promising start. Mike is clearly the bigger of the two brothers and Max resents his bullying. Though I empathise with him as he goes to his room after being pus... view book

Hi Kelly, Read through your first three chapters and this looks very promising. The opening chapter is a great introduction to Stevie. When life gives you lemons, it really gives them to you all at once...I couldn't help reading this with a knowing smile: heartbreak, getting cheated on, your worl... view book

YARG Review Hi Michelle, This is very well written. Your descriptions are subtle yet vivid, your story weaving magical and writing fluid. I read the first four chapters and noted nothing major that needed changing. One small thing that you might need to look at is two or three areas in w... view book

YARG Review Hi K.T., This has been on my watchlist for quite a while and I enjoyed reading it. There is a lot of potential in here and you have a good story on your hands. Cheers, Fyn Chapter 1 Nice start. "King Roland was a thoughtful man who had no desire to lose his life due... view book