Hi Robert. I found the plot very attractive and the initial paragraph promised an engaging lot of events. So I read CH 1 & 2. I felt rushed into the events and made to stand there. Whereas I like being taken into the character's persona, be him or her so to speak thru his impressions rather than ra... view book

Hi Susie, thanks for the comments on my books. I read the 1st 3 chpt and … I'm afraid I can only comment. I loved the 1st chpt. It sets the tone right. I could visualise the family and the kids and the suspense of birth. By chpt 2 I awaited narration. I need variety. Wish you all the best. Rebecca view book

Hi Lynne, I've backed your book. It's on my bkshelf as I was just taken on into your story! Though I was lost with the shifty point of view of the Prologue. view book

Hi Benjamin, I've read few chapters of 'Fidelity' & I must say you are one hell of a writer. I've also read Ch 27 as you requested and I love the chaotic vision to it. Every word is in its place – target reached. However, I wonder why you describe the death of a child? When I let my mind in connecti... view book

Hi Shelly. I had a good time reading this, in part due to my ability to skip the clusters of flashbacks and explanations crowding dialogues. Thus I get a full blast of the dialogues which were vivid and well differentiated. view book