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Cherokeeknight

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I enjoy penning a yarn or poem on a cold winters night. Any other time will do too.

I have one story published by Long Story Short, a flash fiction piece named, Frantic, and a handful of poems elsewhere. Maybe a novel one day, God willing.

You read mine, I will return the favor. If you feel it undeserving of your support, leave a short comment outlining what made you feel it unworthy that I might rectify the situation, I will reciprocate the read.

My personal quest it not a fast arrival at the editors desk, but to craft a work readers will enjoy and crave more. I want to hone my skills; polish my yarn into a memorable piece people will proudly recommend to others. I look forward to the long, arduous journey to completion, wherever it might end.

Drop by, leave a plea for backing or a read swap, and scamper away, I may, and I may not respond. I have my reason for seeming so hardcore. (So many forgotten promises.)

In summery, I return all reads. If you drop by first, you read first, I reciprocate, and vice versa.

That long winded statement being said, all like minded authors, let's work together to achieve our common goals. Happy reading.

Best wishes to all, and to all, a good write.

Thanks,
Nick
cherokeeknight@msn.com

favourite books

Huckleberry Finn,
Treasure Island,
The Zane Grey collection,
The Destroyer Series,
The Executioner Series,
and many more, mostly Sci-Fi and Mystery.

my websites

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Self-publish with CreateSpace

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THE TIME WARRIORS
THE TIME WARRIORS
OWEN QUINN
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The Girl from Ithaca: Book One in the Sister Trilogy
The Girl from Ithaca: Bo....
Cherry Gregory
rank 340
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my books

Invasion From Within

 

Invasion From Within
Nick Fraysher
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Invasion From Within

Nick Fraysher

Immersed in darkness creatures emerge to feast. Lance and Kristin embark on a desperate journey hoping their blood is not the preferred flavor.


Lance finds not only his world changing, but himself. Foraging by day and hiding by night he tries to survive. His only hope may lie in a young woman, Kristin, but first they must accomplish a near impossible feat; putting their differences aside long enough not to maim one another.
By night strange creature emerge. In their wake nothing remains as it was. Like a horde of locus they strip the land of every living thing, flora and fauna. Nothing is safe from their ravenous hunger, but they have a special craving for human flesh. A delicacy soon in short supply.
The battle for survival grows harder daily. New allies give a glimmer of hope. Are they enough, or is it already too late? Can anything stop the feeding frenzy?
Just when things start to look promising a new menace rears it ugly head.

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I wrote 350 days ago

A nice read. You do over use some words. Try to avoid this if at all possible. There are usually other words with the same meaning to take care of this problem. The story moves along very well otherwise. A few words are kind of iffy to me, but that is the writer choice. Make sure you say what you wa... view book

I wrote 382 days ago

My first opinion was, too much telling, and saddly, almost total lack of showing. You use too much passivity. Gives the story a lackluster effect. With a good edit to rework the sentence stucture and make it more active, therefore painting a picture in the readers mind instead of trying to tell them... view book

I wrote 382 days ago

My first opinion was, too much telling and a lack of showing. You use too much passivity. Gives the story a lackluster effect. With a good edit to rework the sentence stucture and make it more active, therefore painting a picture in the readers mind instead of trying to tell them what is transpiring... view book

I wrote 439 days ago

Your writing is good with a few little quirks here and there. Then it could be I'm not familiar with the speech habits in your area. It is a mite slow paced with little to keep some peoples attention for a long period of time and with the length of the chapters that could be a problem. Over all I... view book

I wrote 458 days ago

Thanks to those here at Authonomy -- and another truly dedicated community of writers I visit with -- who's input on Invasion from Within has fuel some new lines of thought I am now in the process of doing an in-depth edit of the first chapters. Many thanks to those who gave their honest opinions. D... view book

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