I'm sorry. I am very new to this site. I didn't realize how the comments section worked, about commenting on other people's sites. As you can see by mine, I just started getting comments today. :-) No, I didn't think you were 'getting back at me'. LOL I actually like your story line. I jus... view book

By the way, you probably should have commented on my comment under this book thread so that your current and future readers will see that you 'corrected my correction'. Putting your comment, which has nothing to do with my book, on MY book thread means that it may not get read by YOUR readers. ... view book

I will concede the "till" debate. Here, my english teachers always told me that using 'till' for 'until' was unacceptable. However, there are major differences in our languages, even though we both speak English. So, as you say, it is acceptable there. My apologies for trying to correct somethi... view book

I'm sorry, but I will be stopping at chapter 1. It was a pretty decent read, but I am American and had trouble picking the story from come of the colloquialisms. What does knackered mean? I think it means 'tired', but I wasn't positive. You made one mistake that I see quite often in unpublished... view book