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I can no longer offer critique, s I am volunteering full time.
Eye of the Idol has now undergone its final edit, and I tremendously appreciate the help my fellow authors have given me.
It's now for sale on Amazon and Smash, and has hit at least two top 100 lists that I know of.

I don't support books when people ask me to.
I don't reciprocate.
I don't care how long you've tried to reach the desk and how you need that extra little help.
I laugh when you ask me to please help move your book,
and
I laugh really hard when you tell me all your friends will help me out too.
In fact, as you can see from my profile, I'm laughing now.

You can find my other book here:
http://www.amazon.com/s/ref=ntt_athr_dp_sr_1?_encoding=UTF8&search-alias=digital-text&field-author=Paul%20Dayton

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http://www.ireadiwrite.com/We-ve-Seen-The-Enemy.ht     http://www.pauldaytonscifi.com

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The Eye of the Idol

Paul Dayton

A 400 year old box, the sinking of an ocean liner, murder, a DPRK master plan...and one man to connect the dots.


I'd like to thank all my fellow authors who have taken the time to give me honest critique. I can no longer offer any in return as I am volunteering full time.
I am still offering critique on my second book, Pandora's Sister, which can be found here:

http://www.authonomy.com/books/29051/pandora-s-sister/

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The biggest thing on Jacob's mind was how he failed his Jesuit assignment when he stole the object he was asked to 'acquire' for the church. Little did he know that what he had done would initiate events that would not only lead to several beheadings and murders, but the sinking of the Empress of Ireland, and much more.

Follow the trail of SIS agent Coleman, Detective Antonin and Professor Sanchez as they piece the puzzle together while running a race against time and against enemies: the obscure group the Black Hand, North Korean and Chinese agents.


Their goal? The Box and its incredible contents.

My acknowledgement list includes***********J.D. Revene, ‘Dutch,’ ‘Sly,’ ‘Bocri,’ Niobrara Kardnova, Ariom Dahl, Dadoo, trainspotter, Karen Eisenbrey and Groaner.*********


More details here:
www.pauldaytonscifi.com

 

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I wrote 526 days ago

Jim, this is eye-catchingly brilliant. I read this is stunned silence. A superb intro, believable details and engaging. I so wish I could write like this. Obviously, I have no critique to offer, as this is so beyond my abilities. Superbly done. You should know, I don’t give praise easily. Paul ... view book

I wrote 533 days ago

This is an example of what a real critique looks like. Thanks Jim view book

I wrote 560 days ago

Well done here. An entertaining, well thought out older children adventure story with shades of Alice in Wonderland. I'm happy to see that you didn't dumb down the writing and conversation as so many tend to do when writing for children. This is the second time around reading this work, and it's e... view book

I wrote 587 days ago

I’ve backed this before, and the reason is simple – this is a fantastic read. I can remember reading through the chapters quite a while ago, and for some reason it’s even better now. Your intro starts perfectly, giving just the right amount of innocence before the mind jarring scene. It’s perfectly ... view book

I wrote 589 days ago

JF, you have a solid story here. Imagination is excellent, and I think your plot will carry the story very well. You’ve also done some editing work to clean it all up, which is very appreciated, s many people tend to download their work in a hurry. I’ve checked a number of chapters and can find not... view book

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