Great stuff - like the idea, like the characters. Very good hook as well. Its shelved. Rikki view book

Hmmm, having listened to my two bickering all day, the first chapter was really something to get through - in other words, you've captured sibling rivalry at its hellish best! The plot is certainly intriguing, compelling enough for me to read on and wow, I was not disappointed! I can really see kids... view book

Fantastic! Only last night I was making up a bedtime story for my little girls about what happened to a little worm who was pulling faces, when the wind changed. I love this. It has a real Alice in Wonderland feel to it, though totally original! The exchanges between the characters are fabulous and... view book

I love this! You present the characters - the distance between the parents, the divided house with the child caught in the middle - in such a wonderfully unique way. I love the way Holly opens the two doors, standing in the middle. The way the parents don't see each other, nor the magical envelopes.... view book

Hi there, I read chapter 16 - Sara. It is beautifully written, Sara's character is intriguing, haunting and I felt an instant empathy with Baran. Enough to compel me to click on to chapter 17 to find out why Sara left so abrubtly. I was not disappointed. What a cracking plot! You write fluidly an... view book