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Dai Alanye

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I'm a third-rate writer striving for second—first-rate is beyond my talents.

I’ve read submissions for two small defunct magazines, and intend to comment in the same vein as for those—that is, candidly. Good writing deserves honest criticism, and we learn more from negative observations than pleasant banalities. But we’ve all put a great deal of ourselves into our efforts, and I know from experience how anything other than adulation is liable to cause pain.

Therefore, let me assure you—all negativity and sarcasm are due to Sir Rupert Evel Bunnie, Bart., Thane of Snark—the Mr Hyde to my Dr Jekyll.

The more things stay the same, the more conditions are liable to alter them. As of 06 February 2012 I'm considering temporarily coming back to Authonomy with a book I've recently prepared for publication. Don't have an exact date as yet.

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Folk Tale, Fiction and Saga in the Homeric Epics /Carpenter
Bomber /Deighton
P & P /Austen
Lyonesse/Vance

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The New Emperor's Clothes

Dai Alanye

When the Emperor of Norica-Onogur dies without issue, a junior prince of Nordmærk is enthroned subject to certain conditions, including marriage. Aye, there’s the rub.


His Imperial Majesty Franz Leopold, ruler of Norica-Onogur, has died, leaving a testament nominating the exiled third son of the king of Nordmærk as successor. The governing powers of the empire are shocked and dismayed, but tradition requires obedience to the deceased monarch's wishes. Lord Nicolai of Bohemia, nearest in descent to the throne, must be shunted aside.


Regardless of the damaged feelings of others, all should look rosy to the new ruler — gaining power, prestige, glory and wealth merely by agreeing to become a Roman Catholic and learn a new language. If Paris was well worth a Mass to Henry IV, leader of the Huguenots, should Vindobon be worth any less to the scapegrace Karl Kristian I?


But there are additional minor requirements. After enthronement as King of Norica, and before becoming emperor, he must wed royalty from one of the nations of the Empire, by preference Princess Madalina Anna of Onogur, a task before which a doughtier man than himself might quail. He must abandon his child by a previous marriage. Most arduous of all, he must conquer the independence and hot temper which had brought about his exile from Nordmærk while in his teens.

 

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Andrew Hughes wrote 1 day ago

Hi Dai, “Informers and blackmailers, phrenologists and dissectioni....

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Dai, In that case I will put my return read to you on hold. It is in....

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I wrote 62 days ago

This is a good thing, but as we all know, it's possible to have too much of a good thing. I searched diligently through the maze of words for a plot, and was rewarded at the end of chapter three, so I suppose I'll read on. Dai Alanye view book

I wrote 70 days ago

Ingenious and decently written. Dai Alanye view book

I wrote 70 days ago

A minor suggestion: Monica, Darlene, Wanda, and so on aren't sufficiently mystical names. Dai Alanye view book

I wrote 70 days ago

This seems worthwhile, and I'm watching it. I find the present tense disconcerting, however, as opposed to past. In spots the writing seem too involved. This sentence, for instance: "The wig, once dark-brown and well-curled, now hangs limply and is matted with some tacky grime." might be simplif... view book

I wrote 70 days ago

Has some promise due to good start, though not my type of read. Dai Alanye view book

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