This is a good story, with vivid descriptions and excellent dialogue. I couldn't find any typo's or grammatical mistakes. Very good so far. Timmy view book

This is a good start, very strong description and excellent characters. I liked Michael Faraday (Also a physicist/chemist in the 1800's), as well as the idea of the rock band. I couldn't find any typo's or gramma mistakes. One part caught me up, when you metion Jim for the first time, you tell u... view book

This is a very good start. I like the characters, the writing flows very well and the dialogue is excellent. I couldn't spot any tyop's or mistakes. I fell the plot could be speeded up a bit, however, this is just my opinion. all in all a very good. All the best Timmy. P.S sorry... view book

I had a look at the first chapter, mostly due to time restraints. The writing flows very well and the characters are very good. Although this isn't my usual genre, i found it very easy to read. Didn't notice any typos or grammamtical mistakes (Although my grammer isn't the best) All in all ve... view book

I had a look through the first chapter and like the writing style. The story flows well and the dialogue is good. I couldn't find anything that hasn't been flagged up already. Very good. All the best Timmy (Asylum) view book