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I enjoy writing fairly detailed critiques. If you're interested in something like that for your book, leave me a message and I'll do my best to give you the honest but tactful opinion of a fellow struggling writer.

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Speaker for the Dead by Orson Scott Card
Tuf Voyaging by George R. R. Martin
Blue Champagne by John Varley
Neuromancer by William Gibson
Lord of the Rings by J. R. R. Tolkien

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Emerald wrote 280 days ago

Dear Migdalin, THIRD WORLD WAR The miracle book that will chang....

ShuabParvez wrote 282 days ago

Thanks, hope I've done enough to get a spin on your shelf!

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Hi there. I wonder whether you are interested in reading my novel, Th....

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Hey Jim I read, loved and backed Destiny Unfulfilled a while ago! Gr....

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I wrote 294 days ago

The book has a clear protagonist in the POV character, Errol Black. As he's a PI, his motivation for pursing the investigative work is understandable, and since he pursues the investigation aggressively, this gives the story its plot. I think the book does a good job of growing the mystery as it... view book

I wrote 349 days ago

I found the prolog to be solid and gripping. I think it is the right length (not too long), the right energy level and the right intensity level for the introduction to a thriller. The novel as a whole contains a lot of intense scenes and a lot of action-packed adventure. My main concern is tha... view book

I wrote 369 days ago

The story has a nicely convoluted set of relationships between the four main characters, and I feel this provides a good backdrop for a romantic murder mystery. Most scenes seemed to contain conflict, which I think is essential. The story also spans a range of genres from romance to suspense to my... view book

I wrote 380 days ago

The alien view of human sexuality does add a interesting twist to the story. I also think that the story does a good job of teasing the reader, gradually building up the erotic tension. The descriptions of sex seem well-done. Although Jay has a goal and he encounters obstacles to achieving that... view book

I wrote 399 days ago

I like the feel of the novel as a story set in a near-past historical period, featuring political intrigue and Cold War-style operatives. It reminded me somewhat of "Day of the Jackal." I feel that the story demonstrates an impressive knowledge of post-WW2 geopolitics, and the coverage of Paris an... view book

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