MichelleThuis

MichelleThuis

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I love good editing buddies. I have a crazy job, so unfortunately I'll only have time and energy to read your book if it actually hooks me. However, if it does, I'll give you lots of feedback.

If you want my feedback on a book, give me a bunch on mine first. Don't be lazy and ask for my feedback but never even read mine. I will delete your message without even looking. ...Yep.

And I won't run around asking you to read mine. Read mine if it catches your interest.

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Heather Riffle wrote 271 days ago

Michele, thank you for the comment! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! ....

Charlotte12 wrote 271 days ago

Thanks a bunch!

Charlotte12 wrote 272 days ago

Hey! Thanks for your comments! I really appreciate you taking the ti....

Heather Riffle wrote 272 days ago

Hello. I'm new to all this but just wanted to thank you for backin....

Valerie T wrote 272 days ago

Hi, Michelle, I think she seems weak because the reader doesn't know....

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I wrote 271 days ago

ch 1. I feel like in the first section, something should be said about still feeling uneasy. No killer has been caught or found. Isn't she worried it could still be out there? I would be. See, you are doing a good job of freaking me out. Especially in that second section. But it would feel more ... view book

I wrote 271 days ago

ch 1. I love the opening sentence. So nonchalant. I really love it. I'll read more soon. :) view book

I wrote 271 days ago

Thanks for the enjoyable read. :) view book

I wrote 271 days ago

Do they really have crowning ceremonies for people already king? Just a thought. Maybe a sort of victorious return ceremony instead? ch 16. "All the lands of Elowna, yours fared the worst." Really? What about the one they flew over that had NOBODY living in it, and the ground was all dead? That ... view book

I wrote 271 days ago

The gourds of water seem too convenient. And not very good for getting her cooperation. She wouldn't die for three days without water. Make her suffer some. ch 15. 'she must have unlocked the door before she passed out'. Really? Oh my goodness, that's the climax and you skipped over it entirely a... view book

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