Hello Andrew, Well, I usually try to write a detailed critique but I'm lost for words here :-) I've written just one pathetic note on my sheet of paper beside my computer and that reads ' "Will you bloody well sit down?" The man snapped..." should not have a capital 't' '. See? That's all I could... view book

Hello Karen...well, it looks like you've updated the first chapter of this. I remember having a few quibbles but they seem to have gone now - it reads much better! This is a great idea - makes a change from the dainty, flowery cute fairies of my childhood...very creepy :-) I'm looking forward to ... view book

Sorry I been so long in getting around to this (hmm - I seem to be saying that to a lot of people these days). I'm really glad I did, though :-) Although I wasn't so sure when I started reading. To be honest, I didn't like the first chapter much. For a start, I thought the dialogue was a bit heav... view book

Jeff - what a treat this is to read! I've only read a mere 7 chapters but I've been totally absorbed. I love the way you write, I really enjoy the story and the setting and I hope I'll find the time to come back to it later as I see you've posted the whole thing. As I cannot fault your storytelli... view book

Hello Simon...you've been on my watchlist for a while, I'm afraid. Sorry I haven't got to you sooner... Well, you can certainly write. I had a chuckle at the word games - especially the 'Charles...What the Dickens?' bit :-) Apart from a couple of word mix-ups in ch 4 (complement instead of compli... view book