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I have just written a novel and would like some feed back from all you well written, well read, well punctuated, well spelt, well grammared, cultured people.

I tried before but didn't get beyond a couple of pages.

That I have actually completed one is nothing short of a miracle! My family and friends are amazed! God love them, they've no sense!

I realise that my efforts are amateurish compared to most people on this site but I would be grateful for any comments which may help me improve.

I want to write a great book at some point in my life, sooner rather than later would be good.

Thanks to anyone who reads it! xox

favourite books

Catcher In the Rye
Romeo and Juliet
Gone with the Wind
Davinci Code
Anything by Jody Picoult
Cookery for Beginners
DIY for Beginners
Suddenly Single
The importance of being Earnest
Off Mice and Men
Anything by John Steinbeck
Sons and Lovers

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WATER IS THICKER THAN BLOOD

Marian Mc Curdie

They says what comes around goes around but does it? Could you forgive? Could you forget? Well could you?


Fate bring together three very different people.

Eileen an elderly Irish woman, who has suffered barbaric cruelty and loss throughout her life.

Paul a young Northern Irish man who hides behind the IRA, in an effort to disguise his homosexuality.

Kate the golden girl who seems to have the fairy tale life, loved by everybody, and married to her Prince Charming.

Their meeting brings about a chain of events that change their lives and those around them.

Their pasts are inexorably linked but will they have the courage to forgive each other.

Does forgiveness mean you forget?

When is murder justified?

This story examines their journey towards acceptance and forgiveness of each other and those around them. They learn that to have a future, the past must be allowed to have it's place.

Is the past a place you would like to revisit?

24/02/2008
If by any miracle I have attracted a reader or readers, would you limit yourself to the first seven chapters (LOL) as I am rewriting chapters eight to fourteen with a view to POV's. xox

 

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Just wanted to say one more thing. Love the title of your book!

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I wrote 1187 days ago

Hello Patrick, I've read and enjoyed your writing. As I said, I know nothing about writing so I can't do cnstructive criticism. It's funny. It is also the most original book I've read on this site. It's new and exciting and I love it. view book

I wrote 1192 days ago

Hi Margaret, Sorry for the delay in getting to your book and thanks again for you comments. There isn't much I can say about a perfect book only I LOVE IT. Good luch for the ed's desk and I've backed you! view book

I wrote 1198 days ago

Allie, I thought your work was entertaining and enjoyable. You have a smooth reader friendly writing style (reader friendly to me). I am beginning to understand your frustration with the lack of interest in non fiction on this site, but I will certainly recommend to anyone I have contact with. G... view book

I wrote 1203 days ago

Hi Sue, Put more chapters up. I really enjoyed this work. My little nephew is autistic,and one of my children has a disabilty,so I identified with this story on a really personal level. In fact I want to cry. It is a story of triumph over adversity,and as there is not much good news about at ... view book

I wrote 1205 days ago

I'v e read your first chapter and really enjoyed it. If I had more time I'd read on. Your story is fast paced and interesting. My only complaint is that sometimes there is a lot going on and although I could understand and follow everything some people may be put off. Martin is a great character ... view book

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