Lots of really good things here. The characters are interesting, with their aura of money, glamour and class and the basic story about how they all got there is good. The pretty village with interesting inhabitants and polo matches is very appealing. I've got a couple of questions marks about so... view book

A guide to self editing isn't a bad idea, given how self publishing has taken off. There are lots of authors who can benefit from advice. But this isn't, yet, that book. For a start, you need to establish your credibility. Why are you the best person to offer advice? Successful books on writing ofte... view book

I don't back books very often, but I enjoyed this first chapter. I wouldn't worry about the change in point of view - I think it actually works well here. I also don't think you need to explain in the first chapter why the two girls are together - there's no need to make everything obvious up front.... view book

Hi Jenny, I like chick lit so I enjoyed reading this. You have a nice, engaging writing style. The only thing that I wondered about is that it takes quite a long time to get into the story - it's all set up, no story, until three chapters in. There are lots of diversions about this and that, but no... view book

Hi there, I came to have a look after seeing your thread on the subject. After reading a few chapters, I feel that Splinker has a point - why are you a person who is qualified to be teaching others about the Bible? You don't need academic qualifications, if you've been changed by the Bible and wa... view book