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THANK YOU SO MUCH TO ALL THE LOVELY PEOPLE WHO BACKED BADD, AND ESPECIALLY TO THOSE 1100 WHO ALSO COMMENTED - I WON'T FORGET.

As I have a star, I'm only interested in getting genuine feed back on BADD saves the queen. I'm not interested in getting any more backing for BADD, and may not return same.

WARNING. Due to sitting for too long at a stretch 'doing' Authonomy - I developed a clot in my right leg - part of this then moved to my lungs and nearly killed me - although I'm now perfectly fine. So I advise regular walk abouts at short intervals.

Currently, I either write, play golf or chess, or invent things - see Mr Potts in Chapter 3. For me, surviving childhood must have been a miracle. Experience has prompted some cautionary tales.

BADD, comprises 24 linked, true-to-life dramas / comedies about a boy growing up. At first, a minor menace, he ends up as a hero. The stories are aimed to engage parents, teachers, young adults, and children aged 8 -11.

BADD IS COMPLETE

There are another 5, optional, full length books, making a 6 book series - in these, Barry ages 9 - 13.
THE OTHER 5 BOOKS ARE WRITTEN AND COMPLETE BUT DO NEED A FINAL EDIT. Most of the 170 chapters have been read and commented on, either by individual children, or classes in school . Kids like and identify-with Barry V Badd.

Agent or editor please note - there are 5 more chapters, to either make book one, BADD, longer, or for use as replacements. Three of these are now uploaded under the title, BADD saves the Queen.

My books are copyright D A Seaby or David Seaby

email david.seaby@yahoo.co.uk



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BADD

D A Seaby

COMEDY
He's so often in trouble - how could Barry Badd end up as a hero?


Barry V Badd knows his name is a jinx - that's what causes all the bother. But as usual, Mum just says "nonsense - you're grounded!"

Discover the truth in 24 linked comedy / dramas.
Each chapter completes a story - a significant incident in a boy growing up. Lessons hide behind the humour: recycling is exciting; superglue is dangerous; pets cause problems; stealing is bad; Gramps could be mad, or is he kidding he's MI6's top agent.

Barry is bold, somewhat cheeky, an inventor, loves animals - hates cruelty - I honestly believe you'll like him.

BADD is COMPLETE.

Authonomy reader, your time is valuable - use the word-counts in Contents (Chapter 1) to choose a story length to suit.


 

BADD saves the Queen

D A Seaby

Barry Badd saves the queen. But first, he is helpful three times in a row, goes for tests, and has a fright in the dark.


BADD, Book One, has five extra chapters. I'm publishing three of them here, along with the first chapter of BADD Book Two,



To make up the required 10,000 words I duplicate the three extra, or alternative, chapters for Book One.


These are just four funny stories, I do hope you enjoy them.

 

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lol thanks. i decided to make the bio a writing exercise for the fun ....

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I wrote 59 days ago

This is certainly not my genre, but I like the writing and the bold style. Backed BADD saves the queen. view book

I wrote 79 days ago

This is well written with some quite remarkable similies and details. I'm very happy to back this. BADD view book

I wrote 79 days ago

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I wrote 81 days ago

A very entertaining subtle stream of conciousness, that makes sense even when the words don't make sense. I thoroughly enjoyed the first chapter and back the book more than happily. BADD saves the Queen view book

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