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Ana Lua

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At night, when my sister and I were younger, she would ask me to tell her a story. Now I ponder why, I didn't then.
That was the beginning of my love for storytelling, for bending the world in a manner that suited me, that felt beautiful, although not always kind.
It was my pleasure and I never thought of sharing it.
Then, when I grew up, I became a social worker in fostering. I have seen many children without voice, without the spark of imagination, knowing they have lost something they cannot name.
And the only way that I could find to survive that plague was to tell stories once more.
But this time I would like to share them, because this time I know not everybody has found their voice.

My avatar is a picture I found on internet when looking for Sohie's World pictures. The connection is lost to me.
If anyone has a clue, I'd love to give it a title.

My email address is dreamsearcher77@yahoo.es

MY AUTHONOMY POLICY

Seeing how many books are there to read and the time I have, I am afraid this is the best I can manage.

My opinions will be based on the first 2-3 chapters only. But I will definitely let you know if I cannot put your book down!

I won't mention typos. I find extremly boring to revise them even with my own writing, and I feel that is something our dear friends and family would be more than happy to help us with.

I find more than fair to swap readings. But for the same reason I am not comfortable with swaping backings. I will only back your book if I like it, and that is the only reason I would like you to back mine.
If I read your book, I will always give you my opinion with the only intention that it may be useful to you, so I will be honest with my opinion, but always polite.

Although getting to the top of the rank would be flattering, that is not my main reason for being here. I am far more interested in impassionate detailed feedback than in a backing. I learn with the first, I just get cocky with the second, which I admit is not a bad thing when you are having a bad day.

And I wish you all inspiration for your writing.

A fellow authonomy writer has warned me in regards to typos in my reviews. So, since I can envisage more coming up, I shall include here my reply.
I'm afraid that with the number of people that have asked me to read their books, I simply do not have time to read my reviews twice. I think it's better if I concentrate the time in the reading and in the content of the review.
And apologies for any future typos coming.

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My love for books is parallel to my love for cinema, both very eclectic.
Lately I've developed a taste for non-fiction, but my growing up novels and films were all classics, noir and adventure mainly.

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Errol, the dragon

Ana Lua

A poetic tale on the dangers of a fragmented family, where the children's world of dragons and witches proves wiser than their parents' mechanical one.


A fishermen's village hanging on the steep slopes of a small bay. Outside, a lonely old house standing on the cliffs. Within, three siblings spend most of their time in the attic. They do not know it, but they are at serious risk of getting lost in a home besieged by silence, with an absent father and a withdrawn mother, who have slowly drifted from their children.
But after a storm everything changes for the Flint siblings when they discover a stranded dragon. When they name him Errol, and agree to help him, they do not understand fully the task they are taken upon themselves. Yet, through delights and sorrows, the four friends keep true to their purpose, trust each other, face threatening witches and also painful corners of their own hearts, finally allowing themselves just to be, not least a water dragon.
Together they weave a story for parents and children to share together, for in the end we forget to our own peril that we inhabit the same world, and it is foolish to state something does not exist simply because we have not seen it. This is a story to claim pride for who we are.

 

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Andrew Hughes wrote 13 hours ago

Hi Ana, “Informers and blackmailers, phrenologists and dissectioni....

emeraldraj wrote 69 days ago

Will you fight for CUPID (god of sexual love) leading men or for L....

AndrewStevens wrote 134 days ago

As a fan of Tammy Robinson's beautifully written 'Charlie and Pearl',....

Nightdream wrote 142 days ago

Hey, Ana. How are things?

kiwigirl2011 wrote 162 days ago

Hi Ana:-) I just wanted to say thank you so very much for your contin....

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I wrote 228 days ago

Hi Bradley, this is my BHCG. I am no MA creative writing so my comments are from a reader's point of view. First point is a reflection I share with you in case you find it useful and it is how I found my profession affected my reading. I am a social worker in fostering. Lots of the children I ... view book

I wrote 236 days ago

This is my BHCG review. I am no MA writing so this is done from a reader's point of view with the hope of being useful. I found the pacing of the prologue very good. I confess I was skipping and had to go back to read again because it was a lot of tension. And the last short sentence, great end, l... view book

I wrote 238 days ago

Hi Cariad, this is my BHCG review for you. I do not have any writing MA so this is just my reader's view. I love the book cover and if I was in a bookshop the pitch would have hooked me enough to open the book and have a look inside. However, after reading two chapters it has failed to grab my att... view book

I wrote 246 days ago

Hi Arlene, I have read your first chapter and here are comments. I liked how you introduced the sick character, with indirect explanations and very matter of course, rather than saying explicitly what he has. Very good way of ending the chapter, in page turning moment. I also liked the story of th... view book

I wrote 253 days ago

I have read the first three chapters. Before I comment on them, I have to say that yours is one of the best pitches I have read. It really does its job of making me want to read the book. It is very intriguing. In regards to what I have read, I like the style. It makes me feel deep brown and green... view book

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