Hi again. I've just finished your second chapter and I really, really have to discipline myself to stop reading here -for now- and go about my business (oh, quite a lot!). But I think I will return and read some more everytime I can afford a break. Backed with pleasure. view book

An enjoyable reading, beautiful descriptions, a mature voice. I loved the sarcasm and the originality of your observations. All the best, Evangeline B. view book

Melissa, I found your short and long pitch brilliant, almost imposible to resist. Equally, your first paragraph (to my mind this is one paragraph) where Rachel introduces herself and the main issue of the story, is intriguing and promising of an authentic voice. Unfortunately, the rest of the ch... view book

When I came across The Impeccable Editor’s Guide to Writing, I started reading the first chapter with some curiosity, as this is the first book I encountered on the matter. By the time I had finished that first chapter I made myself a cup of tea and eagerly plunged into it, reading all chapters avai... view book

Strachan, you asked me to read your first chapter and so I did. What I have to say is that it surely won’t be the last one I read of your work. You seem to be so well aware of what you write, your voice so mature, language so polished and Henry so realistic and convincing, that through his voice... view book