I love the beginning! :) The cover, I have to say, reminded me of some very scary books I used to read when I was younger, they were called Goosebumps, and it intrigued me. So the first thing we realise is this man is strangling someone, which is a brilliant way to hook your reader! It is pacy, ... view book

I have to agree with the previous comment. You have a very alluring, colourful and attractive cover, mystical, certainly the type one would want. :) I do love your style - it reads so beautifully, and is cultural in its incorporation of Hindu gods, incorporations that I thought added beautifully. Th... view book

WOW!!! You definitely know your stuff, especially with the weapons! Those were great descriptions and definitions. I really, thoroughly enjoyed this. It was incredible! 100% backed! I loved the idea that he could use Parkour- it's such an exhilarating way of getting around. If this doesn't get publi... view book

This is a tough market you're trying to get into. There are tons of these types of book, in this genre, and among the tumult it's hard to get noticed. I myself have read enough of these books like twilight to last me a lifetime (exactly 2), but having promised to read it I will! There's no doubt... view book

Well, definitely one to read more of! :D I too will not comment on American grammar, due to differences, I'd probably make a fool of myself. I was so glad you gave a definition of 'blump'. I was ready to go and look it up, a little exasperated, and then there's the definition for me! Brilliant! ... view book