Sue, I think this is the most marketable idea I've come across on Authonomy. I particularly like that you've identified your target audience. But surely this is crying out for a more graphic presentation. If you haven't seen it, take a look at Zane Stumpo's YouTube animation - http://www.youtube.... view book

Lindsay, I've read the prologue and the first chapter. Your writing is good and clear and straight off you've developed a strong character in the priest. I didn't look at the pitches before I started reading the book. I do that on purpose to see what you convey about the story in the opening.... view book

Juno Since my name is Gareth and I have a dog I thought I'd better check this out. You're a very clear writer. Every sentence neatly trimmed to convey the meaning. I like that. There don't seem to be any glaring mistakes. Not sure I need the 'i' and 'Him' presentation of the text; the submiss... view book

SF42 Elizabeth, Nearly brilliant. That's what I think about your novel. I read the first four chapters and found myself enjoying the developing relationship between Ashira & the Duke much more than Arthur's story. I was quite surprised by my own reaction.....I'm more of a Sci-Fi bod and the ps... view book

Jane, I've read the first six chapters. Your writing is about as good as it gets and if there are any mistakes I didn't spot them. All I can do here is offer a few observations and give you my support. Bookcover and pitches all hit the right spot. In particular, the long pitch packs a remarkab... view book